Hello my friend
We meet again
It's been a while
Since I gave you my eyes
I don't know if you feel
My broken pieces
Stained in red; they bleed
But you came back and you stare
It was your eyes where my hope lied
Blue skies met a new sunrise
You have come and you don't say
Anything that I want to hear
You stand before me today
With a new song; completely astray
You came back, not to wait for me
But to see me change to stone
This is just for you to know
Together we always had to grow
We loved; We shared; We cared
We fought; We sought; We cried
But something always was unfulfilled
[ कुछ तो रह गया बाकी|]
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# I've tried to be as less creative as possible. This post was written while listening to some of the most romantic songs I've ever come across in my life. For a moment she came back to me, in my arms, but perhaps I mistook my reverie for a peaceful glitch in time. I've learnt: If somebody stops loving you, there has to be an inveterate reason and possibly many chances that that somebody never loved you truly. Love ain't an easy thing folks. It's a beautiful poison which you have to drink once you know it's there. She never told me how to move on when she's not there. I'll just keep quiet. For a very long time. Until I digest my pain and fucking flush it out. And that's it.
14 comments:
Leo, if in this poem you have tried to be less creative, I don't know what to say about your other works. This poem is mystical... it has a beautiful yet sad charm to it. The pain and hurt comes out very beautifully in your words. Yes you are very true when you love ain't easy. It never was and it never will be, for it is what makes the world go around.
You should take your time and let the hurt heal in its own natural way.....Don't rush things. It is perfectly fine to be doing that Leo....take care!
The poem was written beautifully. I'm in awe of the way you imagined or written such a poem while listening to music. Great.
I totally agree with you about the line you wrote in the last para. You can't stop loving anyone. You might start to hate that person, at worst. But a true love doesn't die.
And if you stop loving someone, that is, if you are aware of it. It was never love.
It might sound filmy but its true.
beautifully written. the lines are certainly heartfelt..and the postscript explains it further.
nothing hurts more than betrayal of love. take your time to heal and all the best..
Beautiful poem and you said it all when you wrote that somebody never loved you truly...
This got so close to me, it brought tears to my eyes. Reading what everyone else has written i seriously find myself at a loss of wise things to say. But what i feel after reading this is so real its actually cruel. And yes moments like these stands as the bitter truth. Often we wish for them to come back, to see them again but that ultimately turns out to be just a macabre mockery at our own selves. I find these peaceful glitches in time more painful as more time passes. Anyway, this was beautifully expressed. may you keep writing and keep bringing people like me to a peaceful communion with our broken hearts.
and this was one of those post which i loved reading..!!simple words yet beautifully woven together!!
Apart from that i loved that post-scripted note more!:P
ps-you know why i dont comment on your blog posts much and this one is something i really liked.Hence,a comment was sure to come!
pps-can i copy one of the line from your post scripted msg as my fb status!!.phuleeeeeezzzzzz!!:P :P
@Me: Thank you so much! With your every comment, I get that much needed spark. :)
@Usama: It is true. It hurts and I wish it hadn't had happened. Hope is my only refuge. And love = My sacrifice. Loved your comment, as always! :)
@Uma: Thank you so much Uma! I agree with you but somehow, I know, it's gonna be alright.
@Saru: Thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked the above love expectoration. :)
@Dess: This is one of the amazing comments I have ever received. Thank you so much! And I am in agreement with every feeling you shared with your comment. It is difficult and it is inevitable. But the wounds heal even with those glitches and I'm sure the sun will shine high soon. :)
You know things are really bad if I'm seeing your post now, when it was posted a week ago! I missed it earlier! :|
Your poems have a beautiful quality in them, for one, I know your emotions are always true. And two, you manage to express them in a few words, which is really hard. This one is really powerful. And I've read these lines for the first time and feel kind of sad. :| "If somebody stops loving you, there has to be an inveterate reason and possibly many chances that that somebody never loved you truly"
@Prerana: I so knew! A day would come when a poet would copy another poet's line. :P
Haha! Of course you can copy. Feel free. But do mention my name under it. Will you? ;)
And thank you so much for commenting this time! I'm so happy I could finally make my words move around your mind so that you could comment here. I am happy. :)
@Ashna: Thank you Ashna! And I know that reason. MBA, the macabre of MBA! :P
I think love looks beautiful at start but tests the hell out of you in between it's thorny journey. Maybe it depends. But as for hitherto, I am out of this shit and I am glad. :D
hahaha...i am not a poet,i just write!And yeah whenevr i would be copying it, i would mention your name.
Actually teri n meri feelings kuch situations me aajkal itni match krti h ki it feels as if u speaking wts on my mind!!this is the reason for copying and loving it!!;)
@Prerana: Ah! I know we have somewhat common problems. :/
Really? I am speaking your mind? Whoa! You can copy then :P
Leo. :) Everytime I read this post, I really want to comment so as to express my appreciation for it. However, by the time it has totally invaded my system and taken root again, words do no justice.
Silence that simply reverberates with the intonations of your words and emotions are what remain.
Lovely writing Leonardo!
@IQ: Amazing are what your comment always. They sure leave a bright spark in me which makes me write more. Thank you so much for being there! :)
@Rahul: Thank you so much Rahul! :)
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