The guitar in me slowly vibrates
I don't feel the same
It pains when you feel the shame
Today, It ain't love, It ain't her
But this thing in me slowly vibrates
I gave away all my moons
To be what I think I can be
But when I cross my reflection
There's always an unsatisfied section
I can't look through to destroy that urge
The guitar slowly vibrates inside
It gives me shame; It gives me pain
When was the last time you smiled?
Oh, it's been more than while
You deserve better, says a disrupted sound
I grin as I fall back on the ground; Eyes closed
That fucking guitar still silently vibrates
I walk by my scattered dreams
Towards the vibrating tune
It's getting heavier; Chills turn on
There's a window; a hanging window
He's down there playing his thing
Who's he? Why's he playing?; I ask
He's just someone thinking about me; Is he?
Tune gets heavier and the drums join in
I smile all the way as I beat the base
I sing in the blue moon with me and my man:
The silent breeze; the silent sun
Floating around and I still feel myself
I know simple and I know no more
That if I stay with me, I'll know and I'll know for sure.
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Eyes opened and he stood up again
This time with a smile and a heavier thing inside
You know what, there's an inner song in you
Which always strives to put a smile on you
You just need to play along my friend
It's simple and I know no more
That if you stay with you, You'll know and You'll know for sure.
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# This post, people, is nothing, just nothing. Because that fucking guitar thing still vibrates.
12 comments:
Not a very easy poem to comprehend.. Read it thrice..
but I did get the crux of it in the end ;)
As always a lovely poem Leo ;)
I love the way you bring out human emotions so beautifully in your poems that it touches a chord.
My fav line in this would be 'You just need to play along my friend' - Will remember these lines forever!!
It isn't nothing, its something and and really, something it is.
I saw what guitar is the second time around. Sure, you need to play along, cause someday you'll know and you'll know for sure. :)
I read it twice and I was thinking and thinking. Well, I am thinking while writing this comment...
@Saloni: You know if I were you, I would've disliked this post, many many times. :/
@Me: Hey thanks! Your comments have an inner sense of happiness for me. I'm glad Leo has you with him! :)
@Usama: Thanks. I bet you would've done some justice to this if it was written by you. :)
@Saru: I myself read it thrice after writing it in one go. I couldn't understand anything, so just posted it and proved my insanity. :|
You know Leo, I strongly believe little bit of insanity is what will keep you sane in this completely insane world :)
@Me: That's what I feel too! Hi-5! :)
I cannot dislike something that i don't understand.. :P
Every writer has a unique mind, and has unique thoughts..
I am no one to judge..
and as i said.. i did get the idea behind your post.. ;)
@Saloni: Haha! An idea can change your....? :P
I'm kind of glad I postponed reading this post for later. I've read it in peace, slowly, with each word at a time and I have to say it's lovely! :)
'There's an inner song in you
Which always strives to put a smile on you'--> Loved it! :D
The best thing about you is your ability to create "feelings" with little words and ask anyone, they'l agree. It's a treat to read your stuff! :D
@Ashna: Hey thanks! Your comments are always awaited in this white city of mine.
I'll put my still sentiments here until all of you keep me going and keep commenting like this. I love it when you say what you feel about the post Ashna. You have always been inspiring. :)
Oh! I can't come so much as near to what you wrote or write any day.
You have actually set the benchmark and its looks tiny when I look up from where I stand.
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