Wednesday, 21 March 2012

A Racy Little Answer To The Wind

                                                                                        Picture Courtesy: Google


I walk a road less traveled by 
Wind ambles beside me with my pace
Instilling a feeling of the white cold
It slowly says, "Hey there. It's a race!"
To which I reply, "Not with me, my end ain't defined yet, in bold!"


15 comments:

Me said...

The real competition always remains with ourselves only - The ultimate truth of life.

Amazing lines ~ bare truth, very well put across.

Loved it!

Usama said...

End will automatically be good if we focus on the path we travel.
A sense of hope prevails. :)

Ashna Banga said...

The truth. Concisely captured ;)
Made me remember Robert Frost! :P

Rakrithy said...

Well written Rachit

rudraprayaga said...

End comes when the time is ripe. Now the time waits for newer and newer beginnings, not for end at all.

Saloni said...

Robert frost II in the making ;)
great!
:)

Saru Singhal said...

I agree with Saloni and the last line was brilliant!

Rachit said...

@Me: Thank you so much! I absolutely love your comments! :D

@Usama: Well said! :D

@Ashna: Oh yeah? I'm glad and stupefied at the same time that me is being compared with a legend! :')

@Rakrithy: Thank you so very much! :)

@Rudraprayaga: Well said! :D

@Saloni: Oh my! You gotta be less motivational and less complimenting or I'll swoon right here! :P

@Saru: It's such a great pleasure to see your comment. The fact that it praised me to such a great level instills inspiration and motivation at a much greater level! I need to thank you for that. :D

thezariworks said...

One word : INSPIRED !

Jyoti Mishra said...

that was a super answer :P
few lines but hell of a message conveyed !!!

Rachit said...

@Thezariworks: Whoa! This is one small comment which speaks a millions words in addition to a million overwhelming feelings it imbues! Thank you so so very much! :D

@Jyoti: Thank you so much. You know sometimes it's good to give super answers. ;)

kiranmurthy said...

Awesome line...
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Rachit said...

Thanks Kiran. Sure will. :D

Santosh Kumar said...

Nice thought..

Rachit said...

Hey thanks Santosh! :D