Colors of light shimmering weakly in me
You stand facing the light; showing me the dark
I count rays uniting in me to shoot a spark
It's not about hope, it's not about faith, it's just about fucking reality which is taking you away from me into the brightness which was once a part of me and I'm here without you facing this indifferent world, closing upon me. Go on, fly away.
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This was the last thing Martin wrote before throwing me away into glowing fire burning beside him to protect him from cold. I wonder if he wants the two of his saviors to unite. I realize, as I watch him leaving me, he's getting stronger and he's getting himself back to his own road where he used to walk alone but steady. Is this a new beginning for him? Is this a start to make a new end?
This fire is eating me, my hope, my determination to be with him in every despondent and exuberant hour of his life. The creator, as you all know, is the destroyer too. It's just my end, not his. So I guess, I'm happy.
This fire is eating me, my hope, my determination to be with him in every despondent and exuberant hour of his life. The creator, as you all know, is the destroyer too. It's just my end, not his. So I guess, I'm happy.
It's a long lonely road when he knows he has to walk alone but, it's surely gonna change the end for he's made a start again.
As he walks leaving me in flames, I want you all to carry my last words to him:
Even if you walk so fast
You still can't change your past
Everything turns
And changing times would earn
Enough brightness and light you yearn
To cover the dark spots and carry you
In the arms of a new reality and imagination
So that you never choose to write me, again.
Everything must have an ending, this time it's me. I go with a promise that I'll get back to you.
17 comments:
Simply Stupendous!!! Needless to say, Superbly written :)
Though I am feeling sad as his diary is ending and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it...but I am sure a genius like you has no dearth of ideas!
quite a relief to learn that the main protagonist has left behind his past(yeah, past can't change but sure can help one construct a stronger future) and decided to move forward..:).."It's a long lonely road when he knows he has to walk alone but, it's surely gonna change the end for he's made a start again"..poignant(yet lovely!!)...another laurel for your writing skill
Rachit, you are tagged!
Hmm past is gone i dont know why we spend so uch time trying ot change it when we cant do anything ..
Bikram's
@Me: Hey thanks!! Your comments always make my day no matter how it has been since morning! Thank you so much for reading my scribbling. :)
@Rinku: Thank you so very much. Agree to what you said. Past can or does help in building a corroborated future. :D
Loved you comment!
@Uma: Thanks a lot! I'm glad you like this blog. :)
@Bikram: Yup. Thanks! :D
oh i hope this is not the end of martin's diary! i want more..
A really awesome and thoughtful post !
:)
Aww thank you so much Saloni! You know, Martin could tell you tales in private if you call him! ;)
some really very awesome lines..
# Enough brightness and light you yearn
To cover the dark spots and carry you..
fantastically written !!
Thank you so much Jyoti! Loved your comment. :D
I've always loved the posts about Martin's Diary. Loved this as well. :)
"Even if you walk so fast
You still can't change your past.."
You write the plain truth... I realize it everyday...
Hey thanks Shreya! :D
This is just brilliant. I am awed each time at your amazing creativeness.
As I may have said earlier too, I wished Martin to throw away that diary which always makes him revisit the past, as much as I wanted to read that diary more and more.
But now, since Martin's in pursuit of happiness, the diary doesn't matter anymore. I am happy. :)
Thank you so much Usama! This post was sure incomplete with your comment. Loved it! :D
Pain heals with time, they say. But sometimes it sure takes a hell lot of time! Beautifully described and really innovative! (Care to share the secret? ;))
@Ashna Banga: Secret? :P
Sure! It's just sitting in front of this computing machine and banging your head on the wall until you can think of something like this! ;)
@Pickled tongue: Hey thanks! :D
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