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| Broken Pieces |
Seldom do they tell about it's pompous reaction
Why do you feel love is brightness and solace?
It contains prolific misery and screeching grimace
It weakens you under the walls of trust and faith
Of all the wonders that you should fear
Love's the most powerful and sweetest poison
This is what a broken soul has to hurl
Stop and stare before you dare to dive in this love sphere
For there's nothing in this world as perennial and perpetual; they're just damn words.
* Tears stream down the sallow skin when the attachment turns into hatred. Feelings turn into somber sentiments and questions rule over all your answers. It hurts when all your questions are unanswered and still life chooses to move on, stepping upon the splinters of your heart. There're wounds time cannot heal because the pain is just too real.
17 comments:
Love is what brings solace to a heart which has been tattered by none other than love.
There is nothing time wouldn't eventually heal, given the wound wants to be healed by it.
I must say again that you are really good poet. Keep writing and let the sands of time do their job. :)
I second Usama's first line.
Plus you write splendid as always, but I wish your writings, that eventually are YOU yourself, to be cheerful and happy. Always :)
Keep smiling. A simple smile also works wonders. Try it :)
(You know all this.. Your post "I can crush curves with your Smile" says it. :))
It weakens you under the walls of trust and faith
Does it really?
I believe, it is the strength after the weakness.
Nicely-written.
GBU
Arti
Umm.. being a 'serious writer' myself, I won't console you, or tell you that 'everything will be okay'.. :p
I know that 'incessant desire' to put down your deep thoughts, no matter how negative they sound, or how pessimistic they seem..
I know that satisfaction of having everything out on paper, aware that, sometime later my views on the very same topic may be completely opposite.. :P
very well written.. :)
Its a deeply felt thought, and hence put down beautifully..
Keep writing :)
Well said Usama. I agree with your lines. Maybe time's the only answer we've got!
Thank you so much commenting like always. :)
@Ashna: Maybe when I see your smile, it may prove to be wonders for shattering my incessant sadness. :P
Loved your comment! :)
@Arti: Yes! It makes you dependent with your full heart and mind on your partner under the walls of trust and faith which when break, leave you clueless and flustered.
@Saloni: This might be my favourite comment by you! :P
So true! Thank you so much for appreciating and keep commenting like this! ;)
Well written Rachit :)
" Love is a medicine for all types of wounds..But, there is no any medicine for the wound made by Love.."
Keep writing ...
I simply loved these lines:
"There're wounds time cannot heal because the pain is just too real."
Bcoz I truly believe time doesnot heal everything.
Loved your post. It's written beautifully as usual. I hope life experienced lead you to be less cynical about love. :)
@Shreya: Thank you so much. :)
@Sikha: That's well said! :D
@Me: Yup. Sometimes time's the only question when you're searching for an answer in it!
@Jayanti: Thank you so so much. I am sure your hope kindles a fire for my future too! :D
Love is indeed "the most powerful and sweetest poison"! Great image!
I love and agree with Sikha's contribution!
"Time will wash over our wound and fade the echo of goodbye"
This is a line from my poem called, "Echoes". You may wish to view it when you have some free time :-)
http://www.the-princess-passions.com/2011/10/echoes.html
"It weakens you under the walls of trust and faith"
The best line.
But then I also agree."there is nothing like love" and I mean it after having seen it in best and worst forms it can come in.
love..........the slow,sweet poison!
@Fiona: I read it. Loved it as always!!! :)
@Sukku: That was the last line I wrote for this post. I'm glad you liked it!
Ya you're write. Everyone has his/her own definition of love. Right? :)
When it hurts too much, I think the only way we can do is to feel it. Feel the pain, no matter how unbearable it is. Feel your heart breaks, feel your soul crushes, feel the pain until it hurts no more.
I believe time alone couldn't heal our wounds, it needs our consent. If we really want to get better, then we should let time take away all the ache.
Let go,dear. Though it's hard, you must.
@Eprilis: This is one of the best and sound compliment cum advise someone has given up till date. Thank you so very much. I truly agree with all what you said. This post is one of those feelings. :)
I think it's the most confused emotion. It teaches you a lot.
You wrote this post beautifully!!!
Rightly said Saru! Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. :)
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