With the beauty of your smile
My heart runs mile after mile
Step by step you're swilling my isle
Let's walk together and make our journey worthwhile.
^ Life's nothing but a sinusoidal line flowing moment by moment; curve by curve. But when you have a lovable soul standing beside you, there's a power in yourself to crush those curves.
***** *****
Suns seems brighter and waves of feelings swishes me in parts as I make someone special smile from the core of their heart. Go on, make an effort for there's not a feeling as great as making this art.
16 comments:
Loved the simple yet powerful words. There is truly no greater feeling than making a loved one smile, which adds to your own happiness like a million times! :)
See? I smiled! :)
Absolutely loved your comment Ashna! With full agreement to you, I smile too! And a big one! :D
Nice thought. *wide smile*
Well, that's a real short and sweet poem. :) Made me smile.
Thank you so much Jayanti! Feels good to make you smile. :D
Thank you so very much Ana. Yup, that's short. Glad that it could curve your lips! :D
Awwww what a beautiful beautiful post and written so beautifully. I think I'm on a word hattrick...
:) :) :)
Wow, Wow, Wow! How's that for your comment Saru? ;)
Loved it. Thank you so much. :)
WoW!!! LOVED this post, Rachit! The creative concept, the beautiful writing and the message it contains ~ all wrapped into one *exquisite* package! I love the way you write! {|:)
P.S. ~ I even learned a new word - sinusoidal - thank you! I'm in love with it he he.
Haha! Fiona, it's a technical word. I'm learning to play with technical words in literary sense! ;)
Loved your comment. :)
Lovely post Rachit :) Looking for more posts from u :)
Hey thanks Shreya! Keep Reading. :)
This is beautifully written. :)
wow!
crushing curves with a smile..! that's such a simple and beautiful thought..
I'm inspired Rachit :);)
Thank you so much, Eprilis! :)
@Saloni: Oh my! You just enthralled me with that last line!! ;)
I agree with you Rachit..
Life is like a sinusoid, with ups and downs,..with mostly unexpected things..and If there is some one, that we can hold our hand ,and go on in life, then..we can crush that curves..
Loved that picture you posted.. Me also Smiled..
Awww this is such a lovely comment Sikha! Loved it. I'm glad you liked it. :)
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