If I could invite anybody for 'tea for two' today, it would undoubtedly be The man in the mirror I find everyday because:
|| There's a lot to ask about what he did
In this rush, why did he make himself sordid
I'll ask him what he wishes for me in future
So that I could lay myself in his cozy nurture
'Please be my other side always for you're my only hope', I wish to say
This time I want you to answer more than just a monkey play
Come out O my reflection for I wish to find what's hidden inside
I'm longing for a deeper ground in me and it's time I should call you beside. ||
Maybe a tea with him alone will make my second man speak other than what I say
Maybe I'll find what I was made for and what I need to explore ahead today.
|| There's a lot to ask about what he did
In this rush, why did he make himself sordid
I'll ask him what he wishes for me in future
So that I could lay myself in his cozy nurture
'Please be my other side always for you're my only hope', I wish to say
This time I want you to answer more than just a monkey play
Come out O my reflection for I wish to find what's hidden inside
I'm longing for a deeper ground in me and it's time I should call you beside. ||
Maybe a tea with him alone will make my second man speak other than what I say
Maybe I'll find what I was made for and what I need to explore ahead today.
23 comments:
Wonderful poem, Rachit! Was it inspired by Akriti Bahal's recent post? I just came from reading hers a short time ago :-)
Wow - very nicely captured thoughts.
@Princess Fiona: Thank You! This post is inspired by my chaotic thoughts, self-introspection and Preeti Shenoy's prompt. :)
@Life Begins: Thank You so much! :)
Beautifully done :)
very creative :)
Thank you for taking part.
Cheers
Preeti
@Preeti Shenoy: Thank YOU for this amazing prompt and idea! :)
That was out of the box :) and in perfect rhyme too :)
Spending some quality time with yourself. I like your take on the topic and the way you wrote it is beautiful...:)
@Anusha: Thank you so much for this lovely comment. :)
@Saru Singhal: I'm glad you liked it and I could make you ponder momentarily. Thank you very much. :)
beautifully written..loved it :)
Thank u so much for visiting and commenting on my space :)
Thanks to you too for commenting here. I'm glad you liked it. :)
First impression, I love your blog. I spent my whole time here exploring what you have put up.
@Naresh: Thank You so much! I loved your blog too. I guess you've been experimenting with the widgets a lot more! :)
wow! this is really a wonderful idea! I had not read your post earlier.
tea with the innerself...
Thank You Arti! I'm happy you liked it. :)
Whoa! This creative prompt's really brought out your creativity! Apart from the idea of inviting 'The man in the mirror', your own inner self for tea, I loved your choice of words. Some poet, you are :)
Ahh! Your comment always takes me to some comfortable dreamy dreams. Loved it Ashna and thank you so much for making my day with such a lovely compliment. :)
this is a lovely poem!!
a very unique idea ;)
nice poem..
great idea to have tea with your innerself as it is important for us to have that conversation to lead us in the right path
@Saloni: Thank you Saloni! I think you should try drinking tea with yourself. Let's see who wins. :P
@Sheils: Yup. Right you are. Thank you so much for this lovely comment. :)
Rachit, you know the reason why I always love your poems? Because, I think they are somewhere written for me too.
Maybe I've said it earlier too, but I won't hesitate saying this a thousand times more.
Congratulations on 10,000 views. I felt really excited and happy about it. :)
Oh wow! Thank you a million times for this embellished comment! Made my day. :D
this is lovely Rachit! so creatively done..superb!
And here's a superb thanks Uma! :D
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