Sunday, 25 December 2011

The Red Lip Eaten


I sit behind; behind the long wall of my thoughts and feelings to measure its robustness. Translucent as it's character I see, my pumping motor wishes to flee. It pains when not a visitor drops by to see through this plain transparent layer of abandoned structure. What if this was opaque, dull and dilapidated? Oh, someone must have peed.

Red Lip's Eaten. (Noticed the picture?)
Because I want more than just okay
More than just okay!
And I give it up, give it up back to Life
Because I want more than just fine
More than just fine!

Dreams feel closer.
Because I decide to run faster than myself
Faster than myself!
And I believe in the sun, in the small round sun
Because it's slow and brightly rising
Brightly rising!

Eyes go lighter and brighter.
Because I decide to look beyond those boundaries
Beyond those boundaries!
And I have hope in the power of madness
Because it's gonna be my inner criticism
My inner criticism!

Colours go dry.
Because I decide to paint it all over again
Paint it all over again!
And I'll ride on the choices by the strong man in me 
Because now I wish to thrive, not just survive.
Yeah! Thrive. Not just survive. 
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Everything else inside speaks more than you've heard
More than empty conversations, filled with empty words
With so much to touch and feel, so much to openly reveal
I'm standing on the edge of me and I'm on Fire. It's a mystery.

But Red Lip's Eaten.
Because I want more than just okay
More than just okay!
And I give it up, give it up back to Life
Because I want more than just fine
More than just fine!
For Everyday a choice is made. And I choose faith. 

With this small pandemonium, I wish Sentimientos Merry-Merry Christmas. There are little things inside but sometimes there's nowhere to confide. Always be there by my side.


10 comments:

Usama said...

A song?
I am not completely awake, still I feel compelled to comment so..

Although, I couldn't get the post completely, given my limited understanding but what I think what you referred to is a new dawn that is about to bring fresh beginning with it.
Today, I would just pray and wish that you rise above, get ahead and reach beyond your own boundaries and thrive in whatever you wish to do.
Faith is what will keep you steady. And, you know that already. :)

Excuse me if I wrote something bad above.

Rachit said...

Thanks Usama. There's nothing bad in expressing the true reaction for whatever you read! As always I loved your comment.

And neither could I get this confusion of my own mind. God bless you. You're a good man and my forever inspiration. :)

Saloni said...

well.. from your new post..
what i interpret is.. (it might totally be wrong) that somebody has said something or did something that has sparked in you a desire to push your boundaries and explore the unexplored. you don't want to be content with what you are and want to be better.. you believe in yourself.. and you know how to keep your faith.. its the fused voice of both your heart and mind..
veryy unconventional..and clean.. :)
had to read it twice to be able to somewhat relate to it.. but i would want to know your interpretation too!

Rachit said...

Saloni I'm so happy you read it twice!
And you interpreted just what my thoughts mean. My conscience feels like taking a deep new start, my way. And that requires painting of my emotional wall with crystal clear colours of my own and no one else. And this time it's gonna be more than just okay and more than just fine! :D

Thanks a ton Saloni. I hope I make sense. But if I don't take my head and smash it to your own wall of emotions!

Ashna said...

Is it just me, or really, most of your posts these days seem to be made for some beautiful songs? It was nice to see a positive post so near the beginning of a new year. :)

I wish you a happy, merry life ahead, with such positivity,will power and faith :)
PS- What kind of secret formula are you using exactly? Your posts are getting awesome post-by-post! :P

Rachit said...

This is the best comment ever Ashna! Thanks Thanks Thanks a ton! :D

I'm so haaaappay! I wish you the same and even more for the coming life. The formula of listening to music and my inner self more often perhaps! :)

Prachee said...

This is funny, I remember i had posted a comment here yday and had started following ur blog, but the comment has disappeared...??
anyways i will rewrite it, but wht i wrote yday was better...
I agree your blog is all about 'me' and 'I' but its your blog afterall and secondly...you write so well that it connects to everybody who reads it and touches them in some or the other way. I can relate to it. Keep writing and sharing! :)
And yes thanks for stopping by my blog and even following it, much appreciated :)

Rachit said...

Comment has disappeared? Haha, Prachee maybe the comment wasn't posted. It happens sometimes. But I'm glad that you posted it again.

Thank You for inspiring me with your kind words. :)

Sikha Arnav said...

Rachit,

Nicely written..Straight from heart and mind..Your photo, with the description of what you started is nice.. you looked so indulged in thoughts, from your expression it is clear that, some thing is preparing there..inside you..

I hope, you got it now..Hope You are now more than just fine..

Good luck for every ventures you go for..
Sikha

Rachit said...

Wow! This is more than just a compliment Sikha! Thank you so very much and yep I've grown since then too! ;)