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Life's the hardest road to cover
If you find any lover
May love's what you discover
Else life'll be even harder to cover
Irate will obscurely hover
Seeing your lover recover
You'll get soulless rollover.
^ Life's a bitch when love turns the wrong way and your heart's still pumping. But there's still time to lose yourself and make a new start because Life's just a piece of art. You gotta make it colourful!
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Life's where I belong
No one can prove me wrong
Brave cold dreams come along
Regrets are standing too long
Yeah, I'll get there if you sing with me;this song!
^ Life's a long unwashed, unpaved and hazy tunnel. Make positivity your light, let yourself fight and let the fire ignite.
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Life's never what you want
Sometimes even dreams haunt
This is not an indirect taunt
Just a straightforward vaunt
Think before making someone daunt.
^ Life's filled with haunting, daunting and taunting people. Make smile your expression, give a smack to depression and kick away regression.
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Life's hell when no one's beating down your door
You get high and dive on cold floor
What you're gonna do when life don't feel like before
Closing time crushes the naive soul some more
There's no one to adore; no one to get your core.
^ Life's a full stop when you feel the why's and how's jumping over your small impatient head. Just calm yourself, and remember, Every new beginning has to have a prior end. Rise again, from the main and flush away disdain.
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Life's a burden when you're the only one
Darkness sheaths you slowly; it's work done
The strong faith once kept turns canon
After a while you realize, you could've chosen.
^ Life's undefined when someone close takes a sad leave and you lament that why didn't God choose you. Everyone has to go, only to feel the white divine place. But they're still with you, watching you; from inside. Let your soul cry, don't remember the date of their fly, One day everyone's gonna die.
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Just an amalgam of innumerable feelings. I promise with the road I've been endowed with that No matter what happens, I'll go on painting it with the positive colours this world possesses.
Life's the hardest road to cover
If you find any lover
May love's what you discover
Else life'll be even harder to cover
Irate will obscurely hover
Seeing your lover recover
You'll get soulless rollover.
^ Life's a bitch when love turns the wrong way and your heart's still pumping. But there's still time to lose yourself and make a new start because Life's just a piece of art. You gotta make it colourful!
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Life's where I belong
No one can prove me wrong
Brave cold dreams come along
Regrets are standing too long
Yeah, I'll get there if you sing with me;this song!
^ Life's a long unwashed, unpaved and hazy tunnel. Make positivity your light, let yourself fight and let the fire ignite.
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Life's never what you want
Sometimes even dreams haunt
This is not an indirect taunt
Just a straightforward vaunt
Think before making someone daunt.
^ Life's filled with haunting, daunting and taunting people. Make smile your expression, give a smack to depression and kick away regression.
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Life's hell when no one's beating down your door
You get high and dive on cold floor
What you're gonna do when life don't feel like before
Closing time crushes the naive soul some more
There's no one to adore; no one to get your core.
^ Life's a full stop when you feel the why's and how's jumping over your small impatient head. Just calm yourself, and remember, Every new beginning has to have a prior end. Rise again, from the main and flush away disdain.
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Life's a burden when you're the only one
Darkness sheaths you slowly; it's work done
The strong faith once kept turns canon
After a while you realize, you could've chosen.
^ Life's undefined when someone close takes a sad leave and you lament that why didn't God choose you. Everyone has to go, only to feel the white divine place. But they're still with you, watching you; from inside. Let your soul cry, don't remember the date of their fly, One day everyone's gonna die.
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Just an amalgam of innumerable feelings. I promise with the road I've been endowed with that No matter what happens, I'll go on painting it with the positive colours this world possesses.
13 comments:
Life is something that you can embrace
It is surely not a frantic race.
When time seems wrong
World seems to give you a bong
Look down in the mirror
Yes, right there!
Freeing yourself from all the terror.
You will always find
Your strongest supporter
Expunging all bind.
Looking back at you with a wish
That life is something to be cherished.
What I see from your post is the mention of words-- 'hardest road', 'burden', 'hell', 'never' in every excerpt. And what I feel is, life is not always that unfair, not something that always needs a mention with negation. It is YOUR life, ONE life; you can mould it the way you want it. Surely loved the 'painting with positive colors' part. :)
I tried to rhyme out the harsh things life shoots at us. In the next lines I tried to tell myself the positive path and the right way. That was what I intended. And my feelings resonate with yours when it comes to Life.
This post was written with optimism and a tad bit of experience. And I loved what you wrote Akriti! Thanks. :D
Rachit, what should I say which you don't know already. After all these wonderful lines are a proof of it.
Just this that I think you are slowly living-out of your 'experiences', which is a good thing always. :)
Thanks Usama. I so wait for your comments! :)
Life is indeed a lot of things. And you brilliantly portrayed them. :) And living it to the fullest is the only way of doing it justice. Nicely written.
Thanks Raj!
Life's much more than what this post says. Maybe "make-believe" is the shortest way to define it. :D
That's quite a take on life. Nicely written:)
Hey thanks Saru! :)
Life's where I belong
Life's never what you want.....
nice interpretations...seeking optimism in pessimism,love in hatred,desperation in dejection,aspiration in dying faith and seeking life in "living"....well i loved above 2 lines(my version of life)..........life is what u make of it....
nice job.good goin..i loved it in whole:)
Thanks Amita!
Life in a life and Rebirth in a birth is the new way of a new mankind. I'm glad you liked it. :)
Such a deeeep interpretation of "Life" and what we all experience. Indeed very very thoughtful.
I like the way you make it rhyme, so we read even more carefully, and then beautifully explain it. :)
I especially loved the last lines.
That is such a lovely poem!
:)
Life's a burden when you're the only one
Darkness sheaths you slowly; it's work done
The strong faith once kept turns canon
After a while you realize, you could've chosen.
just Loved these :)
@Ashna: Thanks a ton! Even your comment rhymes. Loved it. :)
@Saloni: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :D
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