Friday, 23 December 2011

AfterLife@Madness

Feelings, they push words
Sometimes, these words hit worse than swords
Feelings, they push emotions
Sometimes, these emotions make revelations
#Yeah! These feelings push emotions in words.

It's often necessary to give yourself a new start and get back to that straight path you once began with. When your heart starts caving, blue skies turns pale and feelings turn dark in pain, you gotta sing without care. You gotta enter your AfterLife.

[Pick up the golden strings and start.]

I decide. To feel my lungs again.
I decide. To open my eyes in rain.
I decide. To scratch away disdain.
I decide to fight that war with my main.

I won't. Turn back.
I won't. Show what I lack.
I won't. Melt my rack.
I won't let that ruddy fire burn my crack.

I am. The war inside.
I am. The rising tide.
I am. The step of pride.
I am who lived when 'me' died.

I can't. Just shut it up.
I can't. Let it remain stuck.
I can't. Wear the cover of muck.
I can't let this world chase my luck.

You can. Count me out.
You can. See me running up against the crowd.
You can. Hate me till I begin to sprout.
You can do whatever to begin that bout.

I'm riding on my dark horses.
Hope makes blood change courses.
Far far away from circular torses.
I died. To come alive with new choices.
















I'm ready now and waiting for the AfterLife.
[Lick your fingers and smash that string thing on the side wall. Leave.]


16 comments:

Shivang Chopra said...

huh? what? you call this crap? idiot... one of your best creations bro...
sometimes madness takes an enigmatic form in words ... and it seems supremely amazing to see insanity of emotions pouring through words :)
way to go man... thanks for sharing!

Godspeed...

Rachit said...

Thanks Shivang!

That's what's inside, splashed here with the tide. :D
And GodSpeed.

Ashna said...

I agree with Shivang. You're crazy to call it "mad". :P
It's reallyyy good! The urge to begin a new life and live it your way, beautifully described. :)

Rachit said...

Fankx Ashna! Urge described in words. :)

Saloni said...

Lovely! :)
and I love your new theme picture and the little snowman playing with snow on the right.. so cute :P

Rachit said...

Lol! Yeah he's my friend, welcoming the Winter colds with a 'sticky' hand! :P
Thanks. :)

akriti91 said...

It's a really nice compilation of feelings in the purest form.
Love the way you write in a new style each time.
Keep going. :)

Rachit said...

Thanks Akriti. Comments like yours are so inspiring and loving! :)

Usama said...

I wasn't completely right the last time when I said that you are becoming a really good poet. Truth is, you already are a poet.
The profundity in your expression of thoughts is what a poet is gifted of. Keep writing, it has become almost like a dose for me.. :)

Rachit said...

And your comments are like a drug, like a sure necessity! This was so amazing, you made my day. Merry Christmas and a very very good day Usama! :)

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) said...

wowie ! good one :)

Rachit said...

Hey thanks Deepak! :D

Varun Porwal said...

Very nice... loved it... :)

Rachit said...

Thanks Varun! :)

Ana_treek said...

You do.rock :)

Rachit said...

Thanks Ana! :)