As I walk the lonely road
She smiles, proving my poad
Leaves dive in this breeze
This story never got ease
<When I look back, I see Life>
To her, he gave his naive heart
Amidst chaos, love made a spark
Together were many open-seasons
Never thought of any reasons
<When I look back, I see Life>
Words exchanged whole night
Insomnia was once a plight
Love looked forever
No one else could do it better
<When I look back, I see Life>
World saw as this packet of Love sealed
Promises are never made to be pealed
When the future seemed enticing
He saw his sleeping sun rising
<When I look back, I see Life>
But this Time spares no one
Change is its strongest weapon
As the days went by
Love became a pry
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
They once stretched wide
Her lips looked best in that tide
Euphoria changed its way
Hearts remained clay
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
Tears streamed down her face
She felt love's going to waste
Colors which once spelled vivid
Now carve a piece in livid
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
As happiness took sheath
Darkness bloomed this heath
Then she said, Get Away Please!
As I said, this story never got ease
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
Bridge tumbled, as we fumbled
The future looked and grumbled
Is this what we started with?
"You've changed", came the glitch
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
"Career is much more important", were her words
He gave a silent smile, "I knew we were blurred"
Aching out, he swallowed this shot
Deep beneath, he could believe not
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
One day, opportunity knocked
From a famous man, who had a plan
Exuberance covered her face
For her somber was to replace
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
She decided it was time, to carve fate
For all are selfish to fill their slate
Not once she thought, togetherness was once their plot
He feared, he cried, he yelled
This was the time, Love was to be spelled
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
Rebellion was on its peak
Suppression was a mere sneak
Love remained in dearth
They stood beside their hearth
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
She chose to hide her success, she chose to lie
He feared, he cried, he yelled, "What does this imply?"
As love gave its last vows
He now knew, it eventually blows
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
He took back his naive heart
Which was inhumed in her, from the start
Walked past her, saying "Goodbye"
She kept looking, didn't try
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
Facing this empty hall
I ask her in my crawl
Did you ever fall for a shooting star?
One without a permanent scar
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
In love, you only live twice
There needn't be any slice
All thanks to you
But is it too good to be true?
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
As I walk the lonely road
She smiles, proving my poad
Leaves dive in this breeze
This story never got ease
But when I look back, I see Life.
There comes a time on everyone's life when you feel like giving up, tears fill your heart and shadow seems your only follower. It's the time to have faith and believe that the mighty does everything in its own eccentric way. But, sometimes when love deceives you and your heart fails to accept, you should change the road, for it once deceived even the mighty when he fell in this deep ocean. With this inept and effusion-filled verse, I fly away. I will miss you, my Life.
Sometimes you have to let it go, for the better.
~ A Naive-turned-Experienced heart.
She smiles, proving my poad
Leaves dive in this breeze
This story never got ease
<When I look back, I see Life>
To her, he gave his naive heart
Amidst chaos, love made a spark
Together were many open-seasons
Never thought of any reasons
<When I look back, I see Life>
Words exchanged whole night
Insomnia was once a plight
Love looked forever
No one else could do it better
<When I look back, I see Life>
World saw as this packet of Love sealed
Promises are never made to be pealed
When the future seemed enticing
He saw his sleeping sun rising
<When I look back, I see Life>
But this Time spares no one
Change is its strongest weapon
As the days went by
Love became a pry
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
They once stretched wide
Her lips looked best in that tide
Euphoria changed its way
Hearts remained clay
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
Tears streamed down her face
She felt love's going to waste
Colors which once spelled vivid
Now carve a piece in livid
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
As happiness took sheath
Darkness bloomed this heath
Then she said, Get Away Please!
As I said, this story never got ease
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
Bridge tumbled, as we fumbled
The future looked and grumbled
Is this what we started with?
"You've changed", came the glitch
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
"Career is much more important", were her words
He gave a silent smile, "I knew we were blurred"
Aching out, he swallowed this shot
Deep beneath, he could believe not
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
One day, opportunity knocked
From a famous man, who had a plan
Exuberance covered her face
For her somber was to replace
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
She decided it was time, to carve fate
For all are selfish to fill their slate
Not once she thought, togetherness was once their plot
He feared, he cried, he yelled
This was the time, Love was to be spelled
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
Rebellion was on its peak
Suppression was a mere sneak
Love remained in dearth
They stood beside their hearth
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
She chose to hide her success, she chose to lie
He feared, he cried, he yelled, "What does this imply?"
As love gave its last vows
He now knew, it eventually blows
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
He took back his naive heart
Which was inhumed in her, from the start
Walked past her, saying "Goodbye"
She kept looking, didn't try
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
Facing this empty hall
I ask her in my crawl
Did you ever fall for a shooting star?
One without a permanent scar
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
In love, you only live twice
There needn't be any slice
All thanks to you
But is it too good to be true?
<Yet, when I look back, I see Life>
As I walk the lonely road
She smiles, proving my poad
Leaves dive in this breeze
This story never got ease
But when I look back, I see Life.
There comes a time on everyone's life when you feel like giving up, tears fill your heart and shadow seems your only follower. It's the time to have faith and believe that the mighty does everything in its own eccentric way. But, sometimes when love deceives you and your heart fails to accept, you should change the road, for it once deceived even the mighty when he fell in this deep ocean. With this inept and effusion-filled verse, I fly away. I will miss you, my Life.
Sometimes you have to let it go, for the better.
~ A Naive-turned-Experienced heart.
16 comments:
This is such a beautiful, emotional and moving piece of poetry. Loved it to the core! :)
Thank you Ashna. Love bursts out with such amazing and painful things at the same time!
A very well carved piece! I feel writing poetry with rhyming scheme aabb is pretty difficult; I must say you have done a very good job :)
Loved the poem and the message :)
Thank you, Saloni. Emotions make us do the difficult-est things in Life. :)
Very nice Rachit. That's what I always like about your writing. Feelings and emotions coming right out of your heart. And in the shape of rhyming words in this case.
Looking forward for more. :)
Thank you Usama. Heart is one deep ocean of pain and emotions. Often, my heart spits out some of these when it gets overflowed.
this poem deserves a standing ovation....really,m touchd...nd d last para ws awesome...:)
Thanks a lot, Gauri. :)
And a high-high 5 for that standing ovation! Tussi toh inspire kardita! :D
hi Rachit, nice piece....full of emotions and beauty and ya the most important "full of life"....not only this you answered the comments on your post in a deeply philosophical manner..that showed your charming talent..good one..
Thank you a million times Amita. You made my day with such lovely comment. I hope you agree with what I scribbled.
:)
ofcourse...well here's a philosophical reply..."you comment on those things only which you like(agree) or hate(against)"...so as i said that i liked them all because i too agree with your "notion of emotions".. even one becomes practical also with ones deep hidden emotions only that teaches us to follow mind
Very well said Amita. Practicality comes with certain realizations and experiences of day-to-day life. These emotions somehow transform into reactions and these reactions are driven by some rules defined by practicality of society.
Cutting apart from this opinionistic deep crux of philosophy, just when I look back, I see innocence changing into maturness. :)
niceeeeeeee
Thankssssss! :D
Something very real.. very classic.. very touching.. Tears rolled down while reading the piece..!! Aaahh..Its Wonderful Rachit!!
Thank you so much Neha! It's wonderful and so much overwhelming to see that someone connects with me so much! :D
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