Sitting beneath the wind, I shed
In the reminiscence, I pled
Shadows fill my empty heart
Tethered, searches a new start
Drops of emotions fall
Expectations were so tall
For blind faith I wore
Only to listen 'No more'
I longed a bright shooting star
Oblivious; my heart got the deepest scar
Retrieving that first time we met
Promises and only promises I see are unkept
Change brutally ate us
Inevitable as it is, gave muss
With music I live
Emanating olive
To the darkness I croon
Don't leave me so soon
As the days pass by
I look at my empty sky
In this search of bling, what if I go blind
If winter comes, can spring be far behind?
*****************
Choice is what she had
Chose to take away my clad
To her, I say no more
For one day, she'll get my core.
In the reminiscence, I pled
Shadows fill my empty heart
Tethered, searches a new start
Drops of emotions fall
Expectations were so tall
For blind faith I wore
Only to listen 'No more'
I longed a bright shooting star
Oblivious; my heart got the deepest scar
Retrieving that first time we met
Promises and only promises I see are unkept
Change brutally ate us
Inevitable as it is, gave muss
With music I live
Emanating olive
To the darkness I croon
Don't leave me so soon
As the days pass by
I look at my empty sky
In this search of bling, what if I go blind
If winter comes, can spring be far behind?
*****************
Chose to take away my clad
To her, I say no more
For one day, she'll get my core.
14 comments:
Rachit u were a terrific writer, but now u r a great poet too and remember..No amount of darkness can hide the spark of light within u..So stay positive and Have Faith and Keep Smiling :)
Thanks a ton Ridhima. It's a sad poem in a sad mood, but you just vanquished my despondence transiently. :)
A beautifully expressed poem with a smooth flow of emotions, though sad.
Hope to read more happy writes by you.
Thanks Akriti. I'm glad you liked it.
Really nice Rachit,
Pray, I truly for thee,
what is lost, knows not she
And there will be, a plea
that your sorrow, shall flee
Of your gloom, you won't be free
until you get back, your glee
Aww, that was the best comment ever Usama! Thanks a ton and I can see a better and influential poet in you! Give it a shot. :)
Lucidly put. =)
Thanks. :)
I could feel the emotions and yet enjoyed reading them. Beautifully written. Loved it!
Thank You so much Della! :D
lovely poem! beautifully expressed.
Thank You Uma. :)
I am here after a very long time I guess.. I was missing your poetry; the deep thoughts of yours, that come out so beautifully!
Loved it..
:)
Thank you so much Saloni! Your comment does bring significant amount of sunshine to this place! :)
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